I like that you used real people, and I love this pairing. Well done, and keep doing what you do. I enjoyed this a lot, and am looking forward to more work. However, I can't really see if Soul is a guy, or a girl. But, that is neither here or there.
You captured the spirit (not Spirit) of their relationship and of SoMa.
By the way, I understand Maka is wearing a bikini, but I think you should have had a minor warning on this. I'm not trying to be mean, but it is a small request. Thank you for your consideration.